I. WORDS AND PHRASES

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- Approved for Release: 2018/03/27 C06737044 NulS S F=1 REV 1/72 The D/OSR Dictionary, or a General Gyde to What to Travell Upward by Avoiding, Being a Useful Com- pendium of Words, Phrases, Marks, Styles, and Quaint Sayings Which at One Time or Another Have Gotten Someone in Trouble. I. Words and Phrases 1. Subscribers (to a radio net) and generally any word NSA likes, such as anomalies (in communications) 2. very, extremely, formidable,�dramatic, mo- dest, rather--or any other equally uninform- ative modifiers (E.H. White in Elements of Style calls very, rather, and little "leeches Iii the land of prose, sucking the blood of words.") 3. collateral--be specific (e.g., clandestine sources) 4. abort 5. undoubtedly--use "probably", "almost certainly" ("Always one of my lest favorite words"--D/OSR, 8 Jul 69 and.2 Aug 70) 6. latter, former, respectively--must be used with "the greatest care,". i.e., not at all 7. must--"must .is not good intelligence writing" (D/OSR, 19 Feb 68) IL to feel--use "to think" or "to know" or "to judge" or, possibly, "to believe" 9. Chicoms (even dirty red bastards is better) 10: subs--rates'with Chicoms as unacceptable short- hand 11. should--"probably will" is preferred 12. ideally, as in "ideally suited"--use "well suited" (if you have to) or just "suited" N. rz" Approved for Release: 2018/03/27 C06737044 Approved for Release: 2018/03/27 C06737044 13: greatly--"greatly=??" (D/OSR 24 Jan 69) 14. revealed--as in "photography reveals..." 15. classic--when 'standard or typical is meant 16. negated--as in "existence has been negated" 17. SSESS 18. in order to--"it is seldom necessary to say to make your point" (D/OSR, 6 Oct 69) 19. Few, several, some, many,most, and similar words expressive of indefinite quantities when a good hard number (or a. range) could be used 20. Huge 21. ever increasing--"blech" (D/OSR, 1 Jun 70) 22. Med--for Mediterranean 23. "Likely" in an OSR title (e.g., "Likely Missions of...") (D/OSR 13 Dec71) II. Proscribed usage 1. while--when although is meant 2. However,--may not be used as first word of sen- tence 3. effected--accomplished is preferred 4. statute miles, without specifying 5. data as a singular noun--"In OSR, data are." (D/OSR) 6. vessels--for boats, ships, naval craft 7. dates as adjectives--write "the launch on 27 May" rather than "the 27 May launch" (Also on DDI list) 8. probable--do not write "probable missile launcher" when you can say "what probably is a missile launcher" 9. PI expressions--such as IIIC, IIID Approved for Release: 2018/03/27 C06737044 Approved for Release: 2018/03/27 C06737044 � .� r. � 10. underlining names of ships--OCI does, but OSR does not 11. mid-1970s--use mid-Seventies 12. excessive use of acronyms (EUOA) 13. since, when because is meant--"Let's try to avoid this use of 'since', since I don't like it." (D/OSR, 1 Dec 69.) 14. split infinitives--"I am willing to allow that infinitives aan be split with good effect. I believe, however, that is the rarer case." (D/OSR, 1970) III. Punctuation 1. and/or 2. Excessive Capitalization (Too Damn Germanic) 3. all slants (e.g. Kuanchou/Shati) are out and/or prohibited/not used 4. semicolons are never used (except in a series) 5. ...also true, of course, of exclamation points!!! IV. Style . 1. Long paragraphs 2. Long and muuddyie sentences 3. Passive voice 4. "It...that" constructions ("It. is likely that" "It is possible that" V. Miscellaneous proscriptions 1. Clark (without an E). ***Contributions welcome at any time.*** Send to wherever he may be found. Approved for Release: 2018/03/27 C06737044